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PostSubject: Rikimaru   Rikimaru Icon_minitimeSun Apr 11, 2010 5:58 am

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Name: Rikimaru

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Relatives:
Mei (Sister)
Koga (Adopted Son)
Rei (Adopted Daughter)

Personality:

Appearance:
Rikimaru Iwo-1

History:
Though Rikimaru's body is quite unique... his history is mostly boring, and not much use knowing, Born into a family with an elder sister, a loving mother and father... though they acted oddly sometimes, disappearing for days at a time. His condition was discovered quite early, and answers for why such a thing had occured was answered by the mother. Apparently, while 'out and about' she had been close by a Biju while it had been attacking a village... though she didn't go into details, she had escaped unscathed, mostly because she avoided the fighting completely, even though she had been exposed to some of the Biju's Foul Chakra, she herself was uneffected. It was thought that he had absorbed all of it into himself, being of a young age, and wanting to protect his mother, it was supposed.

From there, things were a little boring, him training himself in his own abilities... mind becoming cracked as he first unlocked the full chemical potential of his body, wracked with pains from morning till evening. Eventually his body adapted, insides and outsides becoming Immune to the chemicals... Though by then, his mind was already quite a mess. funnily enough, he continued to work quite well despite this, helping train his sister somewhat as well, his fractured mind connecting in new, different ways... Through this, he created new techniques, and devices, eventually joining Kirigakure soon after it was formed. From there, he supplied the shinobi of the village with new 'toys', little things he made during his spare time with either his hands, or his chemicals.

A while after being in Kirigakure, Rikimaru adopted two Children, a girl, and a boy, both of which lacked any Unique bloodline abilities... mostly because he wanted to see if he could train them both up to be better then the Bloodline Ninja, investing some time, and some of his own creations into them. Both are soon to become genin, and he recently started taking teams, so he could learn the best methods to teach young Ninja, Hoping to be the one to teach the two, as well as seeing how far he could push those he taught.

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Ambidexterous. He can use his Left, or Right hand equally. Extremely dexterous with his hands, double jointed in many places as well... it wouldn'[t be too suprising if he managed to touch the back of his hand to his wrist. Extremely Flexible as well...

Due to the overdose of Yokai due to exposure to a biju while still within his mothers womb, a Dormant ability within his body awoke. Because of it, he is able to create chemical substances and compounds from his body, storing them for later use inside of his stomach, or intestines... otherwise, he uses them immediately on himself in the case of accelerants, and painkillers. For use on others, he is able to either secrete substances through his pores, or through an extra 'vein' he had surgically implanted, upon which, little sprayers, hidden under the skin are connected, trailing all over his body, set so the heads are just beneith the surface, and hidden by flesh that has grown over it, small holes the only thing visible above them. The tiny nozzles method of delivery can be changed with a tiny application of chakra, shifting it from a stream, to a Spray, and as he has trained control over his own body functions, he can control which nozzel the chemical exits from... or attempt for a larger attack by using multiple nozzles. There is another option, via attaching a set of small needles to each nozzle in his hand, he can inject another with a serum through a palm strike.

Due to constant exposure, he has gained an Immunity to the hazardous effects of the chemicals and drugs he uses... his insides as well, so don't expect him to burn himself away when using acid! Of course, he had to build up such immunities... the pain, and chemicals slowly driving him into his now normal, unstable state.

Ninja Data


Rank: Jonin

Position: Living Chemistry Factory, Head of the R&D Department.

Village: Kirigakure

Chakra Nature: Wind, Lightning, Water


Equipment
Various flasks for holding some of his compounds... Multiple waterbottles on a strap across his chest, Notepad tucked into his back pocket.


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Ninjutsu:
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PostSubject: Re: Rikimaru   Rikimaru Icon_minitimeTue Apr 20, 2010 2:26 pm

1) Remove mention of getting your ability by a Bijuu. The happenings of the similar incident in the filler episodes was quite possibly the most idiotic and contradicting thing that has ever been done in Naruto. Make it just a normal technique, since it clearly isn't a bloodline of yours.

2) I am fine with you being immune to most stuff, as constant exposure in small doses could eventually make your body immune. Acids, however, will not. Your flesh will dissolve just as easily every time.

3) Lightning Boost - Filling your body WITH lightning or electricity, unless your directly controlling every last bit of it, sounds like it would be extremely deadly to yourself. If you did control it, it would take a LOT of concentration and chakra. Especially when such a powerful taijutsu technique is from someone that has spent their life training with chemicals and ninjutsu.

4) Ball Compression - Keeping wind in ball form would require constant concentration. Meaning that once formed into a ball, it wouldn't remain that way unless the same amount of concentration and chakra remained constant.

5) Chakra Molding - I just honestly don't get this one. It can't be anything more than regular elemental recomposition of chakra. If it isn't... What is the point of it?

6) Solidification - The same issues as Lightning Boost. Seems way too unhealthy/dangerous, and a taijutsu technique for a ninjutsu/chemical user.

7) The way of Unnatural Healing! - This level of healing seems impossible with "chemicals" alone. Not only that, but it's incredibly powerful, and even healing once would literally have to drain ALL of your chakra.

Cool You can not manipulate all of your chemicals however you wish by using Suiton and Fuuton without actual jutsu of those elements. So, feel free to toss some of those in.
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PostSubject: Re: Rikimaru   Rikimaru Icon_minitimeWed Apr 21, 2010 1:47 am

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1) Remove mention of getting your ability by a Bijuu. The happenings of the similar incident in the filler episodes was quite possibly the most idiotic and contradicting thing that has ever been done in Naruto. Make it just a normal technique, since it clearly isn't a bloodline of yours.

2) I am fine with you being immune to most stuff, as constant exposure in small doses could eventually make your body immune. Acids, however, will not. Your flesh will dissolve just as easily every time.

3) Lightning Boost - Filling your body WITH lightning or electricity, unless your directly controlling every last bit of it, sounds like it would be extremely deadly to yourself. If you did control it, it would take a LOT of concentration and chakra. Especially when such a powerful taijutsu technique is from someone that has spent their life training with chemicals and ninjutsu.

4) Ball Compression - Keeping wind in ball form would require constant concentration. Meaning that once formed into a ball, it wouldn't remain that way unless the same amount of concentration and chakra remained constant.

5) Chakra Molding - I just honestly don't get this one. It can't be anything more than regular elemental recomposition of chakra. If it isn't... What is the point of it?

6) Solidification - The same issues as Lightning Boost. Seems way too unhealthy/dangerous, and a taijutsu technique for a ninjutsu/chemical user.

7) The way of Unnatural Healing! - This level of healing seems impossible with "chemicals" alone. Not only that, but it's incredibly powerful, and even healing once would literally have to drain ALL of your chakra.

Cool You can not manipulate all of your chemicals however you wish by using Suiton and Fuuton without actual jutsu of those elements. So, feel free to toss some of those in.

1) If we're going by that filler of the kid with some of Kyuubi's chakra sealed into him, i'd just like to say this is different. XD Mine is thinking of the chakra effecting him like Radiation, rather then him keeping any of it... But, i'm changing it anyway, because i can't really back it up with logic either way. XD

2) The idea for immunity to Acids was taht his body adapted to it, maybe his flesh altering to take on slight properties that cause the acid to not be able to eat away at the it? eh, pondered thoughts there.

3) Well, it was more running on the Lightning Armor theory that Kumo Kage seems to have, using it to increase impulses and such... and it was going to be converting it into Bioelectricity... either way, i was going to scrap that because it's kinda... too big to teach to genin, and since mine wasn't going to be fighting either way, i was going to toss it. XD

4) Talked with Kida for that. XD it was making something like the outercasing of the Rasengan, and filling the inside with a chemical or water, you know? and i knew that the Concerntration would need to be constant, that's why it would be a good training one. Genin would be forced to keep attention on it, probably making marble sized ones, so that it didn't steal too much chakra... a good way to make them learn to keep a constant rate of concerntration and chakra flowing while moving for later techniques perhaps?

5) Absolutely none... sorta. XD its a way for them to conciously concerntrate on the production rate of an elemental chakra, working faster then the normal way most ninja's do it. But... its mostly something to anoy students with by saying its a special technique. Till they learn that they didn't even need it all that much. XD

6) True. Was also going to be tossed because it was too advanced to be taught to a genin. Perhaps i can make something out of the idea later though...

7) Chemicals and Chakra, my man. XD Chemicals also include ones to stimulate natural healing... to unhealthy levels. That ones more of a Desperation, oh god i want to survive, trick. Yes, it would take all my chakra in one burst, and yes, i'd be quite drained and very hungry and thirsty afterwards. It's a techniques that is Rarely used, but a 'Just Incase' sort, like when you get sliced in half by say, an S-Rank summon. or something of the sort. Rikimaru can say he's always prepared with this. XD


Other Thoughts: I've considered scrapping the Chemical Nin, for this one i've been thinking of... Someone who Creates our oh so mystical weapons. Probably would have a bunch of techniques exclusively for crafting special abilities into items, no? its still a ponder... but for now, i'm going to work on the Chemical nin somewhat more. And yes, i realise i'll need actual special techniques for manipulating my Chemicals, or to cause them to travel through the body, and have been working on those. Just haven't gotten around to putting them on yet. XD
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