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PostSubject: Defense Jutsu   Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:51 am

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Fire Release: Ultimate Defense; Towering Inferno
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element Affinity: Katon
Description: Nyu does two hand seals, and then a towering inferno begins to swirl around her chaotically. Starting at her feet and working its way up. After three seconds it is past her head and is towering up further. After ten seconds it is completed. A Cyclone Inferno is surrounding her at this point, ten meters high and five meters wide. It continues to surround her like this until she decides to release it, she can throw projectiles through the inferno and they will become even deadlier with the flames that are upon them. This is only possible with the help and unique abilities of the Nibi.


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PostSubject: Re: Defense Jutsu   Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:36 pm

For future reference, we need your profile link for jutsu.

Sixty-six meters is dang high for a jutsu. Lower that to something reasonable please, unless you want this to be very taxing on your chakra.

If you can throw stuff out, then other people could throw stuff in. Keep that in mind.

This must be learned IC since you have 3 jutsu already, especially since it's a B-Rank. If you haven't learned/trained and gained this IC, you are not getting it yet. If you have, then link the thread where you got it please.

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PostSubject: Re: Defense Jutsu   Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:00 am

I toned down the height, but on me throwing stuff out, if the fire spins around me at an angle it would reflect stuff one way and enhance the speed of stuff the other, like a wind tunnel or a tornado. Also I know I have to learn it IC, but wanted to get my jutsu where it was correct before I did the rp for it.



On throwing stuff in though, if people could throw stuff in they would need an incredible amount of strength.
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PostSubject: Re: Defense Jutsu   Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:49 pm

I am still doubtful on a Genin performing jutsu that are almost 60 feet high, and lasts for more than a second or two.

Also, I just don't like the idea of a Genin so early on having such an incredibly powerful defense that also acts as an extremely deadly offense. But, I'll ask the other staff to toss in their opinions.

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PostSubject: Re: Defense Jutsu   Mon Apr 12, 2010 3:40 pm

I have the Nibi, who increases my Katon Jutsu. I said in the jutsu I couldn't perform this without the Nibi. It is nothing compared to the one tailed defense, and other. I will take it down to ten meters if that will help but as I said can't do without the Nibi's help.
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PostSubject: Re: Defense Jutsu   Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:11 pm

You can not at all compare it to Ichibi's defense. His is an automatic shield of sand that protects him from basic attacks.

This one is a willed jutsu that is not only MUCH larger, but could quite easily kill someone if you stood next to them while it is active. Yours is also constant, solid, and moving, meaning that no level of speed or power would allow someone to pass the shield without still suffering severe damage. That is the only reason I am not liking the idea of this, especially for a Genin. If you were a higher rank, I would allow it with no problem. But I shall wait for Kida and let him finally judge this.

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