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Neniah
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| Subject: Lynx Shouten Fri Apr 02, 2010 4:28 pm | |
| Personal Information Name: Lynx Mason Shouten Age: 21 Gender: Male Relatives: Kin Shouten (Deceased); Kirru Shouten (Deceased) Personality: As a person, Lynx is a very wise and tactical person which makes him a very great tactician when it comes to dealing with most situations. Though he’s not as fast to react or even capable of being as open and noticeable as most shinobi, however with his overall intellect he is always able to make it out of just about any problem even if with a few minor problems. In the end though he’s often made fun of by others in his same grouping tend to make fun of him for it. Though he is a very well balanced tactician, Lynx carries a destructive nature with him which is born through all of his actions. His rage and hatred for failure is highly destructive, while his longing to act as a shinobi makes his thought process of how they are meant to be destructive towards himself and those around him. While his major not of destruction is his self destructive path which is born due to his desire to become a great shinobi Appearance: Due to his place of birth and being raised by random people, Lynx has a very lady like tone to his skin. It is due to his upbringing which has lead to him having his flesh long since tailored to the point that only the finest of material can compliment it and bring out the luster that is his flesh. His hair has also become adapted to the higher styled hair products. The maintenance that is required to both his hair and his overall body has lead to many bringing up his place of birth as a major factor in his current style of life. Lynx has a finely crafted tone which is due to his endless work and countless amounts of physical exercises he uses to better himself. This enables his muscular tone to showcase itself even while he is covered in the layers of clothing that he tends to wear. Though not very muscular he is still well toned to the point that his overall appearance is kept in primary form. For the most part, Lynx’s attire is his most important aspect of himself as a person of business. His most notable feature is his custom made jacket, a violet shaded leather clad long sleeved jacket. The jacket carries a silver outline to it, while the inside of the jacket is coated in a slick silver lining as well. The buttons and zippers have been replaced from basic material to a high quality silver knock off which causes for the luster of the material itself to remain. Lynx wears a series of high quality material beneath his jacket which is basically just a high end cotton white shirt. The shirt is worn beneath a simple pair of overalls which are black and tend to take on a rather loose appearance. They make up a very fine style to them, seeing as how the material maintains heat very well yet is good at avoiding causing him to become drenched in sweat at the same time. Due to the overall appearance style of the overalls it tends to cause his pants to drag across the ground and become rather filthy. To avoid having his pants dragged across the ground the entire time; Lynx tends to wear heavy brown boots which are heavy and wide enough to place the ends of his pants into them. The boots are fitted with thick straps rather than laces so that they can be safely tied down without worry of them falling off. Lynx wears a fine pair of black leather gloves over each of his hand, while each of middle fingers and pointers are covered in basic metal rings. The rings are very design and each carries a different sign of the zodiac on each one. The left middle finger carries the sign of the Taurus while the left pointer is coated with the symbol of the Virgo. His right hand carries the symbol for Gemini on the right middle finger, and the right pointer holds the symbol for Leo on it. To accompany his rings, Lynx wears a single necklace which carries the symbol of Aquarius on it and is made of basic metal. The necklace also has a quote from his late father on its back side, however Lynx intentionally had the symbol of Aquarius placed onto the other side of the necklaces medallion. History: Lynx is the child of two of the more skilled and talented shinobi of his generation. The first being Kin Shouten and the later being Kirru Shouten. Both Kirru and Kin were known as two of the more skilled shinobi of a later generation and as such it had carried itself down to him when he was born into the joined union of these two skilled individuals. Unfortunately though the nature of the man known as Lynx did not seem to reflect on the truths and understandings of his parents. While they both seemed to be rather accepting, wise, and even understanding without limitations, Lynx on the other hand was quite wild, rude, and horribly unbecoming of man as a whole. To be honest the only reason why Lynx was even given a morsel of respect while he was being raised was due to the fact that his parents seemed to cast an overpowering shadow over him which caused for everyone to honestly and truly treat him as though he had a near infinite amount of patience’s from them alone. Yet, as much as most if not all of the men and women of their parents following wished to deny Lynx. The most notable and understandable concept of him was the fact that he did manage to develop both of his parents power. It was believed to have been a horribly frightening combination once Lynx had reached the age of twelve years of age and everyone seemed to slowly notice that despite his spoiled rotten attitude, that he was in fact one of the more skilled shinobi amongst their groups. However, Lynx’s true time to shine came shortly after both of his parents had been lost in an accidental rockslide which had caused for each of them to have been crushed to death. Due to the sudden turn of events, the people who had been following them were all thrown into a panic and for the most part shared no real sense of self or direction when it came down to selecting a brand new course of action after having lost their original leaders who were suppose to direct them in a proper order. Those who decided to stay had placed all hopes and efforts onto Lynx’s shoulders, and those who were without any level of understanding had slowly begun to drift away. At the moment however, Lynx was only seventeen years old and had no real strength or understanding as to how the world was meant to work for him and the people around him outside of what his parents had told him. However, the primary factor of all of this was perhaps drawn around the idea that he honestly and truly had no real method of teaching or developing the people who had been drawn towards his parents to following him. Without a home of their own to which they could depend on, most if not all of the men and women had given up on Lynx and the idea of actually developing into something of worth. To avoid allowing the men and women who his parents had worked hard to combine together under a single ideal and goal from scattering around and about the world in fear. Lynx took it upon himself to start and finish the original ideals and beliefs of his parents by constructing a home for his people. Perhaps the most amazing feat that had been preformed in all of this was the fact that Lynx single handedly managed to lay down the structural foundation for the village itself. Lynx had used some of the techniques that his parents had directly passed down to him in his training to perform the near impossible task of shifting the earth itself so that he could develop a high end location to which the people whom his parents had spent their entire life trying to protect and lead could be happy. It was perhaps the first, if not most definitely, the only selfless act that anyone had seen Lynx perform in his seventeen years of life. However, it was easily not one that did not leave its mark on the world as a whole. And it most definitely managed to find it’s place in the hearts of the men and women of the Earth Country. Upon having managed to construct the living quarters of the newly constructed village, the most promising issue that was brought up was who was to lead them as the advancements of the country as a whole were still underway. They had first turned to the oldest of men and women, who had all but become useless in their time of old age. Most, if not all of them, were little to any use when it came to constructing the village and many of the men and women didn’t trust the future of a newly constructed village in the hands of a bunch of good for nothings such as the elders of their own people. The second assumption was that the wiser members of the people take up the mantle and act as the heads of the village as though in a diplomatic setting. That way that no one person could ever technically overcome another person so long as the numbers held sway. This became an issue when everyone slowly began to notice that the strength of the people would and could easily over power the simplistic wants and needs of the wise because they lacked any real strength to back up their wisdom. However, in the end, it was a choice that was easily one of the more simplistic answers. The people of the newly developed village took it upon themselves to give power to the person who had literally put everything into it. Though Lynx had been shown to be rash, harsh, lazy, and all around a horrible fit as a leader based on his personality. As time began to show, when the people and his parents needed him most he had dropped everything and spent the last few years attempting to help in the development. As such Lynx has been the acting leader of the village which is now known as Iwagakure, and has been a well versed leader for some time. Village LayoutThe plains of Earth Country are varied. While some might say that plains are plains, with long grass and open skies and wide spaces, and that this couldn’t possibly change, they would be wrong if they came to Earth. Though the plains are all connected to each other, surrounding the giant redwood forests, they are separated by human will into a northern and southern portion. The northern portion of the plains, called Risu Plains, is made up of the plains that are within the valley between the Nekozu Rensan mountain range and the plains that border the Nekozu Rensan on the east end of Earth Country. The southern portion, called Zou Plains, is made up for the plains that touch the Neko Rensan on the south edge and continue east ward, touching the Kaba Coastline and continuing straight up to the north-east of Earth Country, separated from Risu Plains by a thin strip of forest. Risu Plains has the typical long grass set up. However, due to the close proximity to both the mountains and the forests, Risu Plains has a different makeup then Zou Plains. Giant slabs of stone and rock litter Risu, some going up fifty feet high and seventy feet wide. These stone formations are all separate from each other, the remains of ancient battles fought long ago and forgotten by even the greatest historians. Animals roam freely through the plains, fearing no man or creature. Giant felines from the mountains, scores of birds both predator and prey, quiet wolves from the forest, and leaping antelope reside in Risu Plains, confident in their ability to survive. Zou Plains is the complete opposite of Risu, however. Bordering the forests, coastline, softer mountain regions, and other countries, Zou is a much quieter and peaceful area then Risu. The flora is relatively the same as Risu, with long grass and small amounts of bushes and flowers, but the fauna is like from another country compared to Risu. There are very few predatory animals, mainly coyote and wandering lone wolves. Instead, it is the herbivores that reign supreme, with buffalo and various types of cattle roaming the plains, eating and moving on. The animals have developed a special type of coat, which preserves heat in the extreme cold of winter, and sheds rapidly during the extreme hot of summer. There are no obvious landmarks, making it quite easy to get lost in Zou Plains if you do not know your way. The best idea is to stay on the developed roads and tracks, made by people for their caravan journeys. While many people of Earth Country reside in the plains and forests, the majority of the population resides either in the mountains of Earth or the shadows of the great Nekozu Rensan. The Nekozu Rensan is the name of the great mountain range, named so for the predatory felines that roam the mountains freely, hunting goat and other animals. It is said that various parts of Nekozu Rensan resemble giant cats hunting, crouching, and even pouncing, though this could easily have come from the inspired writings of a poet. The mountains are a harsh, fierce place, with little flora or fauna and a wind that is said to kill a man before he even knew he froze. Snow comes regularly to Nekozu Rensan, even during the summer, though sporadically during that time. During winter, Nekozu Rensan is so white that it has been called a shining beacon, due to the immense amount of snow reflecting light. Two lakes are hidden within the mountains, one on each end, which provide water to the entire country via large rivers that flow down the slopes of Nekozu Rensan. The tallest mountain in Nekozu Rensan is easily Shishi Mountain. Shishi Mountain is quite possibly the highest mountain in the world, though others from other countries may contest that. Only the bravest venture to Shishi Mountain, for it is said that anyone who stays within the lion’s peak for more then a day is automatically dead. Indeed, Shishi Mountain’s reputation is so bad that if anyone were to go to the mountain for more then three days, they are considered dead by both family and government, and is treated as such. There has been little evidence to prove otherwise, and so this tradition continues even to this day. The mountains also guard the greatest treasure Earth Country has, and is the center of Earth Country’s very economy. Deep underground, under Nekozu Rensan, are mines, each mine filled with iron ore, precious jewels, and even gold and silver. Other mines carry coal, copper, and other useful metals, all of which are used by Earth Country abundantly. Indeed, the surplus of the mines are so large that it is Earth Country’s main export and is the reason why so many caravans go out of the country to others, selling their useful metals and precious gems. Each mine is named after a type of metal or gem that is mined, though not necessarily the type. For example, there is Kin Mine, but Kin Mine is not limited to just gold, but also other types of metals as well. The valley between Nekozu Rensan is called Nezumi Valley, and is home to Risu Plains, Hitsuji Forest, and many mines and cities. Like the plains, the forests of Earth Country are in reality one huge forest. However, the nature of man likes to put names on various things, and the forest was separated into two major ones, Hitsuji and Ookami Forests. Each forest is exactly the same, having both the same flora, mostly redwood trees, and fauna (wolves, bears, owls, squirrels, moles, various birds, deer, rabbits, etc.) Hitsuji Forest is within Nezumi Valley, bordered entirely by Risu Plains and Nekozu Rensan. It is a relatively thin forest, almost more of a wood then a true forest, except for one thing. Every tree within Hitsuji Forest is incredibly large. The trees within Hitsuji Forest are a kind of mutated redwood, easily twice as high and around as a normal redwood tree is. This makes the forest about 600 feet high, which is larger then some hills and mountains within even Earth. It is unknown why exactly the trees of Hitsuji are so huge, considering the rest of the trees in Earth are no where as big, but it is hypothesized by some scientists that chakra has something to do with the abnormal size. To match large trees, large animals reside within Hitsuji. The animals of the plains and mountains, though large, are nowhere near as large as Hitsuji’s, which can be even fifteen feet long in length for the largest of them Ookami Forest is made up, however, normal size redwoods and normal size animals. The only thing different about complete normalcy of the forest is, however, the abnormal large population of wolves. Ookami Forest is pestered with wolves of all kinds, who roam freely within the forest as well as out in the plains on some occasion. Both a danger and a pest, measures have been tried to rid the strange large population of wolves, but so far nothing has been able to do it. This makes for a strange environment, where it would seem wolves shouldn’t be able to survive for lack of food, but somehow they do. It is a complete mystery on how this is done. To the northeast of Earth Country, there is a wide coastline. Called Kaba Coastline, it is a rocky shore, full of cliffs and large stones and pebbles. There are beaches, though they are sparse and are filled with tiny stones and pebbles instead of typical sand. The water is wild and uncontrolled near Kaba Coast, and inexperienced sailors can find trouble within Earth’s waters, even during summer. During the winter, the weather can be particularly nasty, though merchant ships still come to Earth for trade. There are ship ports, mostly near the coastal city of Chika. The two lakes, Lake Uma and Shimauma, are on opposite ends of Nekozu Rensan, and is the source of all water for Earth Country. Multiple rivers flow from the lakes, moving ever southward, meeting and splitting to form new rivers. The rivers are what provides water, however, to the people of Earth Country. They can be small or large, wide and narrow, rapids and streams. Other: Ninja Data Rank: Tsuchikage Position: Kage Village: Iwagakure Chakra Nature: Earth, Lightening, Fire
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| Doton Offensive ListRank E- Spoiler:
Doton Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu (Earth Military Movement Technique) Requirement: Intelligence=3, Reserves=3 Description: This jutsu allows the user to enter the ground and "swim" in it for a limited time. However, while underground, the user may not use any other jutsu except as noted in this list. The user's time swimming starts at a base of one post and may be extended to four posts. Using this jutsu counts as using a jutsu of the same stage as the duration.
Doton Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Element Earth Clone Skill) Description: This jutsu creates one single clone out of the ground. Its defense is incredible, and it's very powerful, but lacks speed. Two hits will destroy the bunshin. The bunshin has one-tenth the physical stats of the user and may not use any jutsu.
Doton Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu (Rock Throw Technique) Description: Using chakra, the user levitates a small rock and launches it at the opponent as if they had simply thrown it.
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Doton Shuriken no Jutsu (Stone Shuriken Skill) Description: Widely used in situations where the user runs out of projectiles. By picking up dirt from the ground and infusing it with chakra, it molds together and takes the form of a shuriken.
Doton Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Earth Element Inner Decapitation Skill) Description: Usable only when underground via Earth Military Movement, the user swims towards an opponent and reaches up and out of the ground. They are able to partially affect the opponent with Earth Military Movement as long as they maintain contact, dragging an opponent down into the earth. Obviously, a target may try to shake the user off during the technique’s use.
Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth element: Pebble barrage) Description: Another basic technique. The user releases a surge of chakra that is capable of lifting numerous small stones and pebbles off the ground and sending them flying towards the enemy. Only small stones up to the size of a grape can be sent flying and objects too small such as sand will not be carried by the chakra. The force of this attack is not really damaging.
Doton: Rikujou Douyou no jutsu (Earth element: Ground shaking technique) Description: Using this technique, the user sends chakra into the ground to cause the ground to shake. The spot of the ground to affect can be controlled. The magnitude of shaking is rather minor though, only capable of slightly unbalancing the opponent. If done while the opponent is not on firm ground, it may cause him to fall. Useful for distraction as well. The shaking affects a five-foot diameter circle.
Doton Jihibiki Kansei no Jutsu (Earth Element Earth Tremor Sense Technique) Description: By touching the ground, the user can sense tremors or vibrations in the ground. These tremors allow the user to sense when and roughly where contact is made with the ground in a half mile diameter. It does not allow them to know who or what is moving.
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Doton Doryu Taiga (Earth Element Mud River) Description: In this common stone jutsu, the user converts part of the ground that he and his opponent are standing on into a small avalanche of mud and earth. The mud makes standing difficult for the opponent and will potentially carry them along with the weak current.
Maruishi Tounyuu (Boulder throw) Description: This technique focuses chakra on a single boulder nearby and sends it flying towards an enemy. The impact is greater due to the size of the rock, but the boulder moves somewhat slowly due to its size. Only one rock may be thrown in a post. Similar structures, such as concrete rubble, may be thrown as well.
Tsuchi Shouaku no jutsu (Earth holding technique) Description: This technique allows the user to manipulate the earth below an opponents feet to rise up and grab hold onto both their legs. The earthen hands move slowly and are thus relatively easy to dodge. When they do grab hold, the hands are strong but fairly fragile and may be broken by a post of struggling or stage three ninjutsu. This may only be used on natural earth and may not be used indoors.
Doton Katana no Jutsu (Earth Element Sword) Description: Similarly to Doton Shuriken, the user picks up dirt and/or earth, molds chakra into the dirt/earth, and forms a sword of up to nodachi in size. It isn’t as sharp or powerful as a real sword and is destroyed after a few hits.
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Doton Doryuudan no Jutsu (Earth Element Earth Dragon Blast) Description: In this jutsu, a large mud and stone structure appears from the ground in the shape of a dragon’s face. The dragon then shoots many earthen cannon balls which hit the enemy with great speed. Each shot breaks apart upon hitting a solid surface, but travels with enough momentum to carry a deal of concussive force.
Iwagakure Shunshin no Jutsu (Hidden earth Instantaneous Body Skill) Description: An ability which allows the user to transport from one area to another by lowering his body to the ground and eventually become "buried" in it. The user has to have been to the area before and be able to sense the location with his own chakra before being able to transport him there. This means that the distance is limited to about one mile. When used in combat, this may only be used to completely exit a fight and may not be combined with any attacks or other defensive maneuvers in the same post.
Doton: Rikujou Shougekiha no jutsu (Ground shockwave technique) Description: This technique unleashes larger amounts of chakra into the ground to cause a more violent shaking to be sent in the form of a shockwave towards an opponent. The force of the shockwave is enough to knock a few opponents down and send them sprawling. The shockwave is carried by a wave in the earth that spreads outward in a fifteen foot radius.
Doton Ishi no Yari (Earth Element Stone Spear) Description: By using chakra to control the earth below and around them, the user turns it into sharp spears. This jutsu can be used both offensively and defensively. The user can either create a spear to block an opponent's movement or they can hurl the spear at their opponent using chakra. The spears cannot be pulled from the ground without using chakra.
Doton Shindoryuudan no Jutsu (Earth Element Earth Dragon God Blast) Description: In this more advanced jutsu, the user slaps their open palm into the ground and it begins to shake. A large, bronze dragon head peaks out of the ground and roars to reveal its lengthy stone body. Then it dives back under, traveling to the opponent through the ground, causing small tremors along the surface. When it finally reaches the opponent, it shoots up in full dragon form and smashes into them, exploding on contact.
Doton Kekkai Doroudomu (Earth Element Clay Barrier Prison) Description: Technique which completely surrounds an opponent in a dome-shaped prison made of clay or earth. Since the walls of the prison are infused with a user's chakra, any damage taken by the prison is capable of being repaired by that chakra. The prison may be destroyed by stage five ninjutsu or level five strength and will otherwise last for three posts, during which the user must maintain this jutsu.
Ikiumeru no Jutsu (Alive Burial Technique) Description: By performing a series of hand seals, the user can make the ground underneath the target come alive and split open. The earth will swallow the target like quick sand, while a large gap is made to pull the target into. When the entire target is underground, the ground grows solid again; leaving the target buried alive just underground. The entire process takes two posts, during which time a target can attempt to save themselves.
Doton: Sekkai Bunshin no Jutsu (Rock Clone Technique) Description: A clone is created out of rock, not just dirt and other pieces of earth. This clone is faster and stronger than a simple earth clone. The bunshin can have the exact Physical stats of the user.
Doton: Retsudo Tenshou (Earth element: Splitting earth force) Description: This causes a violent earth rift to be sent towards an opponent by slamming one’s open palms on the ground and sending chakra deep in. The earth rifting force can cause unstable grounds to completely collapse and basically crack open the ground ahead and causes changes to the landscape. A thirty foot radius from the user is affected.
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Doton: Yomi Numa (Earth Element: Swamp of the Underworld) Description: A technique which, over the course of a post, creates a large, viscous swamp underneath an opponent. The enemy is unable to move once trapped within the swamp. Further, the swamp cannot be crossed by water-walking jutsu. The swamp is 40 feet in diameter and five feet deep.
Doton: Kyuu Tsuchi dageki (Earth element: Sudden earth strike) Description: A much more advanced version of the Tsuchi Shouaku, a Jounin can cause the earth to rise up at a much faster pace than the Tsuchi Shouaku. The arm created by the technique is capable of rising up to strike an opponent from behind and may even fling a target into the air. The limb is created of rock rather than dirt, requiring stage five ninjutsu or level 5 strength to break out of. It falls back into the ground after two posts, during which time it is subject to the user’s will.
Doton: Tsuchi Zuhan Danmaku (Earth element: Earth plate barrage) Description: This powerful technique utilizes a large amount of chakra to literally lift up pieces of the ground and hurl them at the opponent. With a force greater than Retsudo Tenshou, this technique not only sends violent earth rifts forward, it actually lifts chunks of the ground and throws them at the opponent. Being a ninjutsu, this uses chakra instead of brute strength to perform, unlike its taijutsu variations. A roughly fifteen-foot cube of earth may be thrown at a time in any shape of similar volume.
Dosekiryuu no Jutsu (Rock Avalanche Technique) Description: The user must be near the side of a mountain. A powerful technique, the user molds his chakra to cause an avalanche or rockslide off the side of the mountain. Anyone in the nearby area, including the user and his allies, are subject to be carried away by the avalanche or thrown around by the falling rocks. This most only be used once per thread.
Doton: Dageki (Earth Element: Sudden) Description: The user is capable of healing any wound, life threatening, or otherwise. As well is capable of regenerating any lost limbs and such, assuming the user has time to notice the strike or damage is being dealt to his body. Upon having been struck and such the user turns the selected area into the element of earth itself, and as such he is capable of healing the damaged area by making direct contact with the earth and thus stealing nutrients from it.
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Doton: Iwa Finaru (Earth element: Rock finale) Description: Pulling up dozens of boulders from the earth, the user sends them at a target, causing them to break into smaller and smaller parts. As any part nears an opponent, they explode with tremendous force. The battlefield is soon littered with craters from the explosions. Using this jutsu is incredibly draining on the user and may only be used once before they are unable to use jutsu for the rest of the thread.
Doton Tsuchi Tsunami no Jutsu (Earth Element Earth Giant Wave Technique) Description: After a long series of seals, the user puts his hand on the ground and molds a massive amount of chakra into it. A large, tsunami size wave of earth and rock rises up in front of the user and crashes forward, doing immense damage to the landscape.
Yama Souken (Mountain Creation) Description: A technique that literally changes a landscape incredibly, the user creates a small mountain, about 750 ft high. The mountain is made entirely of rock, dirt, and earth. When the mountain is created, it can totally destroy the area around it, ripping out trees and buildings from underneath. This may only be used once a thread and only when the jounin is at full strength, without having used any other jutsu. Afterward, the jounin cannot use any other jutsu for the rest of the thread due to sheer exhaustion.
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Doton Doroku Gaeshi (Earth Element Rock Shield) In the jutsu, the user lifts up a giant piece of earth and uses it as a shield. A genin can make a 5 feet by 5 feet and 3 inches wide shield, a chuunin can make a 10 by 10 feet and 6 inches wide shield and a jounin can make a 15 feet by 15 feet shield. This shield can protect from one attack before crumbling and ninjutsu destroys it. This is just a shield, nothing more, nothing else, this isn't no magic shield made of stone, it's a stone shield. It is a very loose skill and mostly genin and academy students would rely on such defense.
Doton: Ishi Yoroi no Ude (Earth Element: Stone Bracers) By taking dirt and rubbing it on his/her arms or legs, after performing the necessary hand seals, the shinobi is able to create very durable defensive bracers that add extra protection when using the arms to block. The chakra that is infused in them help to soften the blows of any physical attacks. These are very useful for taijutsu users or to defend against an onslaught of upper body blows.
Tsuchi Tou Tou (Swift Earth) When performing this jutsu the shinobi places his/her hands on the ground and causes it to move rapidly away as if it were a conveyor belt. As the shinobi increases in skill and rank the size, speed, and range of this jutsu all increase.
Ohitsuji Kashira (Ram head) A basic earth protection jutsu where a small, curved wall about the size of the creator is created. It can deflect shuriken and fire jutsu but is weakened by water jutsu. This jutsu blocks physical attacks when the attacker's strength is less than or equal to the power of the Stone-nin. Fire jutsu stage 3 and above destroys the ram head.
Doton: Tsuka no Tsuchi Souzou (Earth Element: Earth Mound Creation) The earth is caused to rise up at least 10 feet and a steep sloped mound is made with the shinobi performing this jutsu at its peak. The mound soaks up water like a sponge making this an effective jutsu to perform when fighting any water using shinobi. Soaking the water doesn't mean that it cancels water jutsu it is just used to stand out of water where the water shinobi would be the most dangerous as you stand top of the peak.
Doton: Sekkai Koutetsuban (Earth Element Stone Breast Plate) By taking earth and rubbing it on his/her chest and stomach, the earth is hardened into a stone breast plate that adds extra protection to the user. The breastplate is held intact through the chakra molded into it. This jutsu blocks physical blows provided user control is superior to opponent strength on base stat of course. This protects only the torso front and back which leaves many openings and requires some preparation no instant armor while fighting someone.
Kajuu No Doro (Mud Weights) Earth shoots at a target’s limbs and then gets stuck, through chakra the earth is made to weigh and slow down an opponent.
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Iwa no Yoroi (Shield of Stone) A thin layer of protective mixture of stone and clay that covers a user's body. Since it makes the user cover him with hard stone and clay, this jutsu causes the user's body to weigh more and stamina usage is increased. Very similar to the armor of sand (Suna no Yoroi). While using this jutsu the Stone-nin experiences a lesser level in speed. This jutsu defends against physical attacks when the strength and speed of the attacker is equal to or less than twice the control of the Stone-nin.
Doton Doryu Heki (Earth Element Mud Slide Barrier) A defensive jutsu in which the user creates a thick wall of earth to defend against an attack.
Iwane Banpu (Rock Bump) A simple yet effective technique. The user performs a set variety of handseals, then takes a rock in his hands. He then throws the rock in the position he needs it to be, and the spot where the rock lands and puts an imprint into the dirt, a rectangular-prism shape, about a foot long, rises up out of the ground. Depending on how much chakra is put into the rock he created, the size of the earth rising can be from the length of an ankle up to a knee. Used for tripping the enemy.
Sekkai Senbon Hada (Stone Needle Skin) The Stone-nin’s body becomes entirely covered by earthen armor that has very sharp and durable needles. The armor itself isn’t very thick, but it still is highly discouraging to any taijutsu user to hit someone using this technique. Someone attacking this body covered of needles is guarantee to hurt themselves severely. While using this jutsu, the mobility of the performer is highly limited. The user loses 4 Speed when using this jutsu.
Doton: Bakuyaku Iwa Kawarimi (Earth Element: Explosive Stone Body Replacement) This jutsu replaces the body with a large stone or even a boulder, using Kawarimi no Jutsu. There is a rather dangerous difference though, the boulder that replaces the stone-nin’s body is explosive and if struck explodes with the force of an explosive note.
Doton: Wareme Souzou (Earth Element: Chasm Creation) When this jutsu is performed the stone-nin places his/her hands on the ground and focuses chakra into the earth. From the power of the chakra flowing into it, the earth splits apart and a chasm is created. The longer that the shinobi focuses chakra into the earth, the wider and deeper the chasm becomes. At first post it is 10 feet deep and 3 feet wide, second post it is 20 feet deep and 6 feet wide, and it continues increases by a depth of 10 and a width of 3 for every post it is continued. This is very useful when creating a protective barrier for someone else.
Sekkai Saka (Rock Hill Creation) A large hill made of rock is created. The slope is very steep and made of slippery shale rock. It is useful as a defensible platform to perform other techniques from. Even someone with tree walking will have difficulty walking up the slippery shale rock.
Doton: Iwane Wooru (Earth Element: Rock Wall) Starts out exactly like Iwane Banpu, by performing the same hand seals, and grabbing a rock, but it is a much bigger rock. Much more chakra is added to this rock, and whenever it hits, a large, rectangular prism-shaped object rises up out of the ground. This time, it is concentrated as a height, and is approximately three feet in width and six feet in height, stopping the enemy completely. Very useful in bad situations where a good defense is needed. A very sturdy wall that cannot be removed from the ground, almost like a wall of a building, made of stone. For every 10 Power, another foot in width and 3 feet in height is added to the wall. This jutsu blocks physical attacks when the attacker's strength is less than or equal to the control of the Stone-nin. Effectively this wall cannot be pushed around by water and wind and anything similar provided that they are stage 3 and under, higher level ninjutsu can take down the wall.
Doton: Iwa no Doomu (Earth Element: Earth dome) An elaboration of Doton Doryu Heki (Earth Element Mud Slide Barrier), this jutsu retains its predecessor's characteristics and more. Instead of forming a single, straight wall which can protect the user from only one angle, this jutsu enables the user to create a wall not just all around him, but from above him as well. If the technique is successful, the user should be inside a thick dome of stone which is quite difficult to destroy. The disadvantages are obvious- one cannot see outside the dome, and an opponent would have time to prepare an attack the user won't be aware of. Furthermore, holding the dome together requires a great deal of chakra, and the jutsu can only be active for a few minutes (4 posts), and after that it will simply crash. If the opponent's power or strength are higher then the Power of the user, the opponent can break through the dome.
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Sekkai Keibou (Stone Guard Creation) This technique creates a phalanx of semi animate stone figures with large shields, tiger heads, and giant pikes. The phalanx of monsters are as fast as a genin, but may only fight as a single unit. They can not stray more than 3 feet from one another. The performer of this technique must remain at the center of this phalanx or the phalanx will become immobile. The phalanx can protect from most physical attacks and have a wide offensive range with their pikes, they can be taken down by stage 4 ninjutsu and higher.
Bouseki Take (Spinning Peak) After either the Earth Mound Creation or Rock Hill Creation are used, the shinobi may perform this technique. This causes the mound of earth to spins rapidly making standing on it nigh unto impossible. Only the very peak, where the stone-nin is standing, remains immobile.
Doton: Kukan no Sekkai Senshi (Earth Element: Body of the Stone Warrior) The shinobi immerses themself within the earth and then rises out of it again covered in earth. The earth form a giant body of stone made to be formidable and defensible. It is almost as if the Stone-nin has gained another body. The body is usually at least 10 feet tall and comes complete with a large shield in one hand and a sword, spear, or pike in the other. Only the face of the Stone-nin can be seen. Other stone jutsus can be used after the performance of this jutsu from the stone of the warrior itself. As it stands on the ground it automatically replenishes its supply of stone. The shinobi cannot move, however, and the stone body can be destroyed by continuous attacks. The armor stays up for 3 posts before crumbling but effectively offer the best physical defense possible, stage 5 and higher offensive ninjutsu deteriorates the armor but even if the armor is destroyed by a ninjutsu, the user wouldn't be severly hurt because of the armor thickness.
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Sekkai Bunshin: Shinogeru Inshou (Stone Clone: Protective Seal) Defensive seal that protects an Earthen wall from all types of attacks. More than one seal must be used to be effective. Seals must be attacked to get past the incredible defense at which time they create a rock clone of whoever destroys the seal. The seal must be placed after the defense have been made, one seal per post. 1st seal: Protect from all physical hits 2nd seal: Protect from all Ninjutsu 3rd seal: Protect from everything This effectively mean that it would take 3 posts, to have a perfect defense on a defensive stone jutsu but the seal itself is not protected from harm, if the opponent attack the place where the seal is put, the seal will vanish. The seal is clearly visible on the stone as being shining yellow from both side of the walls. You can only make 3 seals per thread. Each Seal Requires an A rank amount of Chakra to preform
Sekkai Zanchuu (Stone Pillar) A stone pillar lifts the shinobi high in the air away from combat. The pillar comes equipped with small stone needles that shoot when touched. The creator of the stone pillar has a limited control over it that allows it to move very slowly. This is a great way to increase the distance between the defender and an attacker. The pillar rises up 30 feet into the air.
Doton: Iwa Guntai Tate (Earth Element: Rock Army Shield) A flat defensive slab of earth shoots out of the ground and forms walls that guards each member of your team. The maximum number of people that can be protected are four. The user of the technique decides which side of his/her allies the wall will be formed on. the user can create shields in a 40 foot diameter. This jutsu blocks physical attacks when the attacker's strength and speed (base points) are less than or equal to the control and power of the Stone-nin. Those grand scale shields can barely whit stand ninjutsu attacks mostly practical against rain of arrows or a massive explosion.
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Sekkai Suke (Stone Shell) Protects an ally or allies with a three sided stone shell, up to 3 can be created at once. This is basically the Army Shield technique only with a wider scope of defense. the user has a diameter of 40 feet. This jutsu blocks physical attacks when the attacker's strength and speed (base points) are less than or equal to twice the control of the Stone-nin.
Sekkai Daichi Souzou (Stone Castle Creation) A small fortress made of earth is created that can be filled with traps. After this jutsu is used then any trap related earth jutsu only requires 1 seal to perform when using the materials of the fort. Can only be used once per thread. The traps are simple, such as collapsing ceilings, closing walls etc.
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| Subject: Re: Lynx Shouten Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:55 pm | |
| 1) Your entire history seems to be composed of absolutely nothing but details of a castle. Could you actually put more of a history in please? Also, nobody else started creating a village before your character. He is the one that decided to make a hidden village for the first time, and become a leader of it. So please edit accordingly.
2) Your jutsu ranks need to be changed. You have several somewhat difficult techniques listed as E and D rank, when they would all be at *least* C, without question.
3) Remove the Dust Clone technique. Dust is a combination element that requires a bloodline.
4) Remove the Quicksand skill. That is sand manipulation. If you change it to something along the lines of your character willingly dragging the earth inward ~like~ quicksand, using chakra to control it, then that would be okay.
5) Remove the magnetic stuff, please. Some parts of it are a bit much, and the entire thing seems like too much of a bloodline or hidden technique to be allowed, especially with the massive number and great power of all the elemental techniques you have.
6) Earth Element: Swamp of the Underworld - Remove the mention of not being able to walk across it. There is no reason for that.
7) Earth Element: Mud Moat - Same as above.
8 ) You don't *have* to change this one, but on Ohitsuji Kashira (Ram head) <~do you realize that Doton is the most defensive against Suiton?
9) Earth Element: Body of the Stone Warrior - It says the stone automatically replenishes itself. Just know that it will take chakra to keep putting more stone onto it.
10) Stone Clone: Protective Seal - Remove or edit that part that says "Protects from everything." Nothing will be entirely indestructible, unless you state that the third part takes a LOT of chakra.
As for making a mountain - So long as you can reassure me that that there is practically no way for it to harm someone, as otherwise it seems like an insta-kill in a huge radius, then I shall allow it since it takes 100% of your available chakra. But even with that weakness, I need to know that it will not be a *mountain**ded peeps**lawlz* sort of technique. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lynx Shouten Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:41 pm | |
| Editing History Sooner or Later. And as for the techniques look at the rank that'll answer most of the questions. Also for the one thing I didn't edit. - Quote :
- 10) Stone Clone: Protective Seal - Remove or edit that part that says "Protects from everything." Nothing will be entirely indestructible, unless you state that the third part takes a LOT of chakra.
It's an A ranked jutsu which has to be preformed 3 times. So yeah it's a lot of chakra. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lynx Shouten Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:24 pm | |
| All changes have been made, and assuming that this all checks out, I'd ask would it be alright to post the writing example in a seperatd post. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lynx Shouten Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:06 am | |
| Approved and you can post the sample in a different post. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lynx Shouten Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:46 pm | |
| As he gripped the earth, the soil began to tell its tale. A tale of rough tundra and shattered plates residing beneath it as though to tell him tails of each and every step which had passed over it. As though with each and every ounce that his palm managed to grab a hold of, twisting spinning and easily being broken apart beneath he massive might of his own chakra in a combined effort to his strength. It was perhaps one of the more simplistic techniques that he was capable of performing, yet in the same breathe one of the more annoyingly strenuous skills for his body to manage to develop and design.
Yet at the heart of things this was nothing. Nothing but a passing fancy which seemed to have nearly an end, a presence, or even a simplistic glance which could count it as anything of the sorts. The image of what his father had taught him during the time of his original tutoring of such a technique and power. The structure and basis which he had been told and taught about, ranging from such simplistic methods as lifting with his knees and not with his back, from things that were so far out there that he was unable to even understand what his father had meant back then.
The idea that with each and every inch of earth that he would move, shift and carry, that the immense weight of trying to mess with such a finer design would sooner or later turn against him. As though the weight of everything that he would try to move, push, pull, and bend would someday cause for everything to become too much for him. As though a forewarning of his own ill doings when it cam to performing such a feat, a warning which had developed into what he could only consider dramatic irony now that he thought back to the idea that his parents had been lost to him due to the same earth which they themselves had pushed and pulled time and time again.
However, as Lynx began to grip the earth twisting and pulling it behind his chakra as though trying to rip it from its proper place. He knew all too well that the people who had been watching him had their faith in him, as did the people who had been listening to him speak with each and every passing hour which caused for him to grow older and older. They had watched him when he was at his weakest, a baby with nothing to hold onto aside from his parents and what the people had seen in him during all of his years of growth and development.
As though the shapes and agenda’s that they carried for him as a person directly controlled everything that he had wanted and dreamt of. Their hopes, dreams, and wishes were his agenda, and even now as he carried the weight of the world beneath him in an attempt to up heave the earth itself. Yet on his back was the weight of his parents, and all that they had given him. If not just the life that they had brought forth for him so that he could become a better person, then at the very least the techniques which they had instilled into him so that he could become a proper person.
As he slowly began to feel the earth between his fingertips slowly folding and molding into a sphere, the men and women around him began to slowly cheer as though trying to congratulate him for having preformed such a feat. They continued to ring out with cheers all the while watching him slowly hoisting the heavy weight in an attempt to move slightly while he bore it over his head.
The sphere itself was at least twenty yards in diameter, and it was large enough to easily crush a building or two. Yet in Lynx’s hands it seemed as though it was nothing more then a ball designed as a children’s play thing that was simply being held in his hands. With a slight heaving motion, Lynx effortlessly tossed the sphere which he had been holding onto into the opposite direction of where they had been standing, causing for a heavy thud to be heard upon having noticed that it had made it’s mark and landed.
Before he could even sit down and relax after having carried such a strenuous weight, the image of one of the older men of the village began to show up beside him bearing a heavy grin atop his face. “Thank you so much for assisting us in developing a new open hot springs for the village. If not for you, we’d be stuck with no place to which we could relax and…” His words were cut off by the emergence of Lynx’s hand standing directly before him as though to silence him. It was in a flash almost like a movie star, Lynx quickly grabbed a hold of his jacket which had been laying to his side and whipped around placing it onto his back before taking his leave.
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| I like the rp sample, if you can keep about that quality then i say Touche... Approved | |
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