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PostSubject: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeFri Apr 02, 2010 4:28 pm

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Name: Lynx Mason Shouten

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Relatives: Kin Shouten (Deceased); Kirru Shouten (Deceased)

Personality:
As a person, Lynx is a very wise and tactical person which makes him a very great tactician when it comes to dealing with most situations. Though he’s not as fast to react or even capable of being as open and noticeable as most shinobi, however with his overall intellect he is always able to make it out of just about any problem even if with a few minor problems. In the end though he’s often made fun of by others in his same grouping tend to make fun of him for it.

Though he is a very well balanced tactician, Lynx carries a destructive nature with him which is born through all of his actions. His rage and hatred for failure is highly destructive, while his longing to act as a shinobi makes his thought process of how they are meant to be destructive towards himself and those around him. While his major not of destruction is his self destructive path which is born due to his desire to become a great shinobi


Appearance: Due to his place of birth and being raised by random people, Lynx has a very lady like tone to his skin. It is due to his upbringing which has lead to him having his flesh long since tailored to the point that only the finest of material can compliment it and bring out the luster that is his flesh. His hair has also become adapted to the higher styled hair products. The maintenance that is required to both his hair and his overall body has lead to many bringing up his place of birth as a major factor in his current style of life.

Lynx has a finely crafted tone which is due to his endless work and countless amounts of physical exercises he uses to better himself. This enables his muscular tone to showcase itself even while he is covered in the layers of clothing that he tends to wear. Though not very muscular he is still well toned to the point that his overall appearance is kept in primary form.

For the most part, Lynx’s attire is his most important aspect of himself as a person of business. His most notable feature is his custom made jacket, a violet shaded leather clad long sleeved jacket. The jacket carries a silver outline to it, while the inside of the jacket is coated in a slick silver lining as well. The buttons and zippers have been replaced from basic material to a high quality silver knock off which causes for the luster of the material itself to remain.

Lynx wears a series of high quality material beneath his jacket which is basically just a high end cotton white shirt. The shirt is worn beneath a simple pair of overalls which are black and tend to take on a rather loose appearance. They make up a very fine style to them, seeing as how the material maintains heat very well yet is good at avoiding causing him to become drenched in sweat at the same time. Due to the overall appearance style of the overalls it tends to cause his pants to drag across the ground and become rather filthy.

To avoid having his pants dragged across the ground the entire time; Lynx tends to wear heavy brown boots which are heavy and wide enough to place the ends of his pants into them. The boots are fitted with thick straps rather than laces so that they can be safely tied down without worry of them falling off.

Lynx wears a fine pair of black leather gloves over each of his hand, while each of middle fingers and pointers are covered in basic metal rings. The rings are very design and each carries a different sign of the zodiac on each one. The left middle finger carries the sign of the Taurus while the left pointer is coated with the symbol of the Virgo. His right hand carries the symbol for Gemini on the right middle finger, and the right pointer holds the symbol for Leo on it.

To accompany his rings, Lynx wears a single necklace which carries the symbol of Aquarius on it and is made of basic metal. The necklace also has a quote from his late father on its back side, however Lynx intentionally had the symbol of Aquarius placed onto the other side of the necklaces medallion.

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History: Lynx is the child of two of the more skilled and talented shinobi of his generation. The first being Kin Shouten and the later being Kirru Shouten. Both Kirru and Kin were known as two of the more skilled shinobi of a later generation and as such it had carried itself down to him when he was born into the joined union of these two skilled individuals.

Unfortunately though the nature of the man known as Lynx did not seem to reflect on the truths and understandings of his parents. While they both seemed to be rather accepting, wise, and even understanding without limitations, Lynx on the other hand was quite wild, rude, and horribly unbecoming of man as a whole. To be honest the only reason why Lynx was even given a morsel of respect while he was being raised was due to the fact that his parents seemed to cast an overpowering shadow over him which caused for everyone to honestly and truly treat him as though he had a near infinite amount of patience’s from them alone.

Yet, as much as most if not all of the men and women of their parents following wished to deny Lynx. The most notable and understandable concept of him was the fact that he did manage to develop both of his parents power. It was believed to have been a horribly frightening combination once Lynx had reached the age of twelve years of age and everyone seemed to slowly notice that despite his spoiled rotten attitude, that he was in fact one of the more skilled shinobi amongst their groups.

However, Lynx’s true time to shine came shortly after both of his parents had been lost in an accidental rockslide which had caused for each of them to have been crushed to death. Due to the sudden turn of events, the people who had been following them were all thrown into a panic and for the most part shared no real sense of self or direction when it came down to selecting a brand new course of action after having lost their original leaders who were suppose to direct them in a proper order. Those who decided to stay had placed all hopes and efforts onto Lynx’s shoulders, and those who were without any level of understanding had slowly begun to drift away.

At the moment however, Lynx was only seventeen years old and had no real strength or understanding as to how the world was meant to work for him and the people around him outside of what his parents had told him. However, the primary factor of all of this was perhaps drawn around the idea that he honestly and truly had no real method of teaching or developing the people who had been drawn towards his parents to following him. Without a home of their own to which they could depend on, most if not all of the men and women had given up on Lynx and the idea of actually developing into something of worth.

To avoid allowing the men and women who his parents had worked hard to combine together under a single ideal and goal from scattering around and about the world in fear. Lynx took it upon himself to start and finish the original ideals and beliefs of his parents by constructing a home for his people. Perhaps the most amazing feat that had been preformed in all of this was the fact that Lynx single handedly managed to lay down the structural foundation for the village itself.

Lynx had used some of the techniques that his parents had directly passed down to him in his training to perform the near impossible task of shifting the earth itself so that he could develop a high end location to which the people whom his parents had spent their entire life trying to protect and lead could be happy. It was perhaps the first, if not most definitely, the only selfless act that anyone had seen Lynx perform in his seventeen years of life. However, it was easily not one that did not leave its mark on the world as a whole. And it most definitely managed to find it’s place in the hearts of the men and women of the Earth Country.

Upon having managed to construct the living quarters of the newly constructed village, the most promising issue that was brought up was who was to lead them as the advancements of the country as a whole were still underway. They had first turned to the oldest of men and women, who had all but become useless in their time of old age. Most, if not all of them, were little to any use when it came to constructing the village and many of the men and women didn’t trust the future of a newly constructed village in the hands of a bunch of good for nothings such as the elders of their own people.

The second assumption was that the wiser members of the people take up the mantle and act as the heads of the village as though in a diplomatic setting. That way that no one person could ever technically overcome another person so long as the numbers held sway. This became an issue when everyone slowly began to notice that the strength of the people would and could easily over power the simplistic wants and needs of the wise because they lacked any real strength to back up their wisdom.

However, in the end, it was a choice that was easily one of the more simplistic answers. The people of the newly developed village took it upon themselves to give power to the person who had literally put everything into it. Though Lynx had been shown to be rash, harsh, lazy, and all around a horrible fit as a leader based on his personality. As time began to show, when the people and his parents needed him most he had dropped everything and spent the last few years attempting to help in the development. As such Lynx has been the acting leader of the village which is now known as Iwagakure, and has been a well versed leader for some time.



Village Layout
The plains of Earth Country are varied. While some might say that plains are plains, with long grass and open skies and wide spaces, and that this couldn’t possibly change, they would be wrong if they came to Earth. Though the plains are all connected to each other, surrounding the giant redwood forests, they are separated by human will into a northern and southern portion. The northern portion of the plains, called Risu Plains, is made up of the plains that are within the valley between the Nekozu Rensan mountain range and the plains that border the Nekozu Rensan on the east end of Earth Country. The southern portion, called Zou Plains, is made up for the plains that touch the Neko Rensan on the south edge and continue east ward, touching the Kaba Coastline and continuing straight up to the north-east of Earth Country, separated from Risu Plains by a thin strip of forest.

Risu Plains has the typical long grass set up. However, due to the close proximity to both the mountains and the forests, Risu Plains has a different makeup then Zou Plains. Giant slabs of stone and rock litter Risu, some going up fifty feet high and seventy feet wide. These stone formations are all separate from each other, the remains of ancient battles fought long ago and forgotten by even the greatest historians. Animals roam freely through the plains, fearing no man or creature. Giant felines from the mountains, scores of birds both predator and prey, quiet wolves from the forest, and leaping antelope reside in Risu Plains, confident in their ability to survive.

Zou Plains is the complete opposite of Risu, however. Bordering the forests, coastline, softer mountain regions, and other countries, Zou is a much quieter and peaceful area then Risu. The flora is relatively the same as Risu, with long grass and small amounts of bushes and flowers, but the fauna is like from another country compared to Risu. There are very few predatory animals, mainly coyote and wandering lone wolves. Instead, it is the herbivores that reign supreme, with buffalo and various types of cattle roaming the plains, eating and moving on. The animals have developed a special type of coat, which preserves heat in the extreme cold of winter, and sheds rapidly during the extreme hot of summer. There are no obvious landmarks, making it quite easy to get lost in Zou Plains if you do not know your way. The best idea is to stay on the developed roads and tracks, made by people for their caravan journeys.

While many people of Earth Country reside in the plains and forests, the majority of the population resides either in the mountains of Earth or the shadows of the great Nekozu Rensan. The Nekozu Rensan is the name of the great mountain range, named so for the predatory felines that roam the mountains freely, hunting goat and other animals. It is said that various parts of Nekozu Rensan resemble giant cats hunting, crouching, and even pouncing, though this could easily have come from the inspired writings of a poet. The mountains are a harsh, fierce place, with little flora or fauna and a wind that is said to kill a man before he even knew he froze. Snow comes regularly to Nekozu Rensan, even during the summer, though sporadically during that time. During winter, Nekozu Rensan is so white that it has been called a shining beacon, due to the immense amount of snow reflecting light. Two lakes are hidden within the mountains, one on each end, which provide water to the entire country via large rivers that flow down the slopes of Nekozu Rensan.

The tallest mountain in Nekozu Rensan is easily Shishi Mountain. Shishi Mountain is quite possibly the highest mountain in the world, though others from other countries may contest that. Only the bravest venture to Shishi Mountain, for it is said that anyone who stays within the lion’s peak for more then a day is automatically dead. Indeed, Shishi Mountain’s reputation is so bad that if anyone were to go to the mountain for more then three days, they are considered dead by both family and government, and is treated as such. There has been little evidence to prove otherwise, and so this tradition continues even to this day.

The mountains also guard the greatest treasure Earth Country has, and is the center of Earth Country’s very economy. Deep underground, under Nekozu Rensan, are mines, each mine filled with iron ore, precious jewels, and even gold and silver. Other mines carry coal, copper, and other useful metals, all of which are used by Earth Country abundantly. Indeed, the surplus of the mines are so large that it is Earth Country’s main export and is the reason why so many caravans go out of the country to others, selling their useful metals and precious gems. Each mine is named after a type of metal or gem that is mined, though not necessarily the type. For example, there is Kin Mine, but Kin Mine is not limited to just gold, but also other types of metals as well.

The valley between Nekozu Rensan is called Nezumi Valley, and is home to Risu Plains, Hitsuji Forest, and many mines and cities.


Like the plains, the forests of Earth Country are in reality one huge forest. However, the nature of man likes to put names on various things, and the forest was separated into two major ones, Hitsuji and Ookami Forests. Each forest is exactly the same, having both the same flora, mostly redwood trees, and fauna (wolves, bears, owls, squirrels, moles, various birds, deer, rabbits, etc.)

Hitsuji Forest is within Nezumi Valley, bordered entirely by Risu Plains and Nekozu Rensan. It is a relatively thin forest, almost more of a wood then a true forest, except for one thing. Every tree within Hitsuji Forest is incredibly large. The trees within Hitsuji Forest are a kind of mutated redwood, easily twice as high and around as a normal redwood tree is. This makes the forest about 600 feet high, which is larger then some hills and mountains within even Earth. It is unknown why exactly the trees of Hitsuji are so huge, considering the rest of the trees in Earth are no where as big, but it is hypothesized by some scientists that chakra has something to do with the abnormal size. To match large trees, large animals reside within Hitsuji. The animals of the plains and mountains, though large, are nowhere near as large as Hitsuji’s, which can be even fifteen feet long in length for the largest of them

Ookami Forest is made up, however, normal size redwoods and normal size animals. The only thing different about complete normalcy of the forest is, however, the abnormal large population of wolves. Ookami Forest is pestered with wolves of all kinds, who roam freely within the forest as well as out in the plains on some occasion. Both a danger and a pest, measures have been tried to rid the strange large population of wolves, but so far nothing has been able to do it. This makes for a strange environment, where it would seem wolves shouldn’t be able to survive for lack of food, but somehow they do. It is a complete mystery on how this is done.

To the northeast of Earth Country, there is a wide coastline. Called Kaba Coastline, it is a rocky shore, full of cliffs and large stones and pebbles. There are beaches, though they are sparse and are filled with tiny stones and pebbles instead of typical sand. The water is wild and uncontrolled near Kaba Coast, and inexperienced sailors can find trouble within Earth’s waters, even during summer. During the winter, the weather can be particularly nasty, though merchant ships still come to Earth for trade. There are ship ports, mostly near the coastal city of Chika.


The two lakes, Lake Uma and Shimauma, are on opposite ends of Nekozu Rensan, and is the source of all water for Earth Country. Multiple rivers flow from the lakes, moving ever southward, meeting and splitting to form new rivers. The rivers are what provides water, however, to the people of Earth Country. They can be small or large, wide and narrow, rapids and streams.

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Rank: Tsuchikage

Position: Kage

Village: Iwagakure

Chakra Nature: Earth, Lightening, Fire


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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeFri Apr 02, 2010 6:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeMon Apr 05, 2010 1:55 pm

1) Your entire history seems to be composed of absolutely nothing but details of a castle. Could you actually put more of a history in please? Also, nobody else started creating a village before your character. He is the one that decided to make a hidden village for the first time, and become a leader of it. So please edit accordingly.

2) Your jutsu ranks need to be changed. You have several somewhat difficult techniques listed as E and D rank, when they would all be at *least* C, without question.

3) Remove the Dust Clone technique. Dust is a combination element that requires a bloodline.

4) Remove the Quicksand skill. That is sand manipulation. If you change it to something along the lines of your character willingly dragging the earth inward ~like~ quicksand, using chakra to control it, then that would be okay.

5) Remove the magnetic stuff, please. Some parts of it are a bit much, and the entire thing seems like too much of a bloodline or hidden technique to be allowed, especially with the massive number and great power of all the elemental techniques you have.

6) Earth Element: Swamp of the Underworld - Remove the mention of not being able to walk across it. There is no reason for that.

7) Earth Element: Mud Moat - Same as above.

8 ) You don't *have* to change this one, but on Ohitsuji Kashira (Ram head) <~do you realize that Doton is the most defensive against Suiton?

9) Earth Element: Body of the Stone Warrior - It says the stone automatically replenishes itself. Just know that it will take chakra to keep putting more stone onto it.

10) Stone Clone: Protective Seal - Remove or edit that part that says "Protects from everything." Nothing will be entirely indestructible, unless you state that the third part takes a LOT of chakra.

As for making a mountain - So long as you can reassure me that that there is practically no way for it to harm someone, as otherwise it seems like an insta-kill in a huge radius, then I shall allow it since it takes 100% of your available chakra. But even with that weakness, I need to know that it will not be a *mountain**ded peeps**lawlz* sort of technique.
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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeTue Apr 06, 2010 7:41 pm

Editing History Sooner or Later.

And as for the techniques look at the rank that'll answer most of the questions. Also for the one thing I didn't edit.

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10) Stone Clone: Protective Seal - Remove or edit that part that says "Protects from everything." Nothing will be entirely indestructible, unless you state that the third part takes a LOT of chakra.

It's an A ranked jutsu which has to be preformed 3 times. So yeah it's a lot of chakra.
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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeWed Jun 30, 2010 2:24 pm

All changes have been made, and assuming that this all checks out, I'd ask would it be alright to post the writing example in a seperatd post.
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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeThu Jul 01, 2010 11:06 am

Approved and you can post the sample in a different post.
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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeThu Jul 01, 2010 1:46 pm

As he gripped the earth, the soil began to tell its tale. A tale of rough tundra and shattered plates residing beneath it as though to tell him tails of each and every step which had passed over it. As though with each and every ounce that his palm managed to grab a hold of, twisting spinning and easily being broken apart beneath he massive might of his own chakra in a combined effort to his strength. It was perhaps one of the more simplistic techniques that he was capable of performing, yet in the same breathe one of the more annoyingly strenuous skills for his body to manage to develop and design.

Yet at the heart of things this was nothing. Nothing but a passing fancy which seemed to have nearly an end, a presence, or even a simplistic glance which could count it as anything of the sorts. The image of what his father had taught him during the time of his original tutoring of such a technique and power. The structure and basis which he had been told and taught about, ranging from such simplistic methods as lifting with his knees and not with his back, from things that were so far out there that he was unable to even understand what his father had meant back then.

The idea that with each and every inch of earth that he would move, shift and carry, that the immense weight of trying to mess with such a finer design would sooner or later turn against him. As though the weight of everything that he would try to move, push, pull, and bend would someday cause for everything to become too much for him. As though a forewarning of his own ill doings when it cam to performing such a feat, a warning which had developed into what he could only consider dramatic irony now that he thought back to the idea that his parents had been lost to him due to the same earth which they themselves had pushed and pulled time and time again.

However, as Lynx began to grip the earth twisting and pulling it behind his chakra as though trying to rip it from its proper place. He knew all too well that the people who had been watching him had their faith in him, as did the people who had been listening to him speak with each and every passing hour which caused for him to grow older and older. They had watched him when he was at his weakest, a baby with nothing to hold onto aside from his parents and what the people had seen in him during all of his years of growth and development.

As though the shapes and agenda’s that they carried for him as a person directly controlled everything that he had wanted and dreamt of. Their hopes, dreams, and wishes were his agenda, and even now as he carried the weight of the world beneath him in an attempt to up heave the earth itself. Yet on his back was the weight of his parents, and all that they had given him. If not just the life that they had brought forth for him so that he could become a better person, then at the very least the techniques which they had instilled into him so that he could become a proper person.

As he slowly began to feel the earth between his fingertips slowly folding and molding into a sphere, the men and women around him began to slowly cheer as though trying to congratulate him for having preformed such a feat. They continued to ring out with cheers all the while watching him slowly hoisting the heavy weight in an attempt to move slightly while he bore it over his head.

The sphere itself was at least twenty yards in diameter, and it was large enough to easily crush a building or two. Yet in Lynx’s hands it seemed as though it was nothing more then a ball designed as a children’s play thing that was simply being held in his hands. With a slight heaving motion, Lynx effortlessly tossed the sphere which he had been holding onto into the opposite direction of where they had been standing, causing for a heavy thud to be heard upon having noticed that it had made it’s mark and landed.

Before he could even sit down and relax after having carried such a strenuous weight, the image of one of the older men of the village began to show up beside him bearing a heavy grin atop his face. “Thank you so much for assisting us in developing a new open hot springs for the village. If not for you, we’d be stuck with no place to which we could relax and…” His words were cut off by the emergence of Lynx’s hand standing directly before him as though to silence him. It was in a flash almost like a movie star, Lynx quickly grabbed a hold of his jacket which had been laying to his side and whipped around placing it onto his back before taking his leave.
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PostSubject: Re: Lynx Shouten   Lynx Shouten Icon_minitimeThu Jul 01, 2010 3:58 pm

I like the rp sample, if you can keep about that quality then i say Touche...
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