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PostSubject: ~Katsu Takeshi~ (Done Jounin)   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:05 am

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Name: Katsu Takeshi

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Relatives:
  • Ryu Takeshi [ Dad ]
  • Kiru Takeshi [ Little Bro ]


Personality: Katsu is a silent guy he doesn't really adores or loves talking. He hates children ALOT. He wished kids never existed in HIS world. Though he always loves revenge when it comes to battling he has a little brother that doesn't seem to be annoying he feels the same as Katsu. He loves Ramen and rice too he adores eating while he has spare time and is hungry. He takes most missions seriously and some not because it may be easy he has completed this much missions.

Katsu is independent, secretly sensitive, and has a weird sense of humor that only some people get. Katsu has lived with his father for her whole life, so he learned how to keep the house in order, make dinner, and do other household things by herself, this developed her interdependency. Because of his independence he makes it seem to others that she is strong and that little bothers hi, but that is not the case. He takes things to heart too often and has his feelings hurt easily. His mood's contradict each other sometimes, and at some points in her life it is difficult to see how he will react.

Katsu is pretty bloodthirsty for his age, he prefers fight over flight. He is sometimes blinded by the inevitability of the situation, and this could lead to her death in the future. He is sometimes immature, and is often referred to having her mind in the gutter. She is also known for his flaring attitude, and her extremely bad language. Because of some of her bad qualities,he has not yet recieved a squad to train. Worse, children actually avoid him. It is well known that Katsu HATES children.

Katsu's independence will also be part of his eventual downfall. He liked to be by himself in combat, and dislikes teamwork, but can stand it. He does not have a strong sense of nationalism at all, and could be convinced to do things easily if they involve adventure and freedom. He likes Konohagakure, but he thinks inside that the outside world is more exciting and adventurous then in a walled in village.

Appearance:
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Katsu Takeshi's skin colour is white and yellow mixed together. He is 124 lbs, 6"7 tall he has insane dark black hair, and blue eyes. Katsu always were's a sweater that is all white on the outside and black on the inside. Though he washes the sweater every 2 days. He has muscles but it doesn't show but when he takes his shirt of you see it. Katsu is very flexible when he battles he can bend down and toucht eh ground without bending his knees.

His hair is always spiked up like in the picture and his neck is very long. He always carries smoke bombs around with him in his little pocket as he usually does. He isn't fat he's pretty skinny in my way. So now imagine him in you're head therefore there is the description about Katsu Takeshi there is more after! The random amazing guy!

History:

Pre-Academy Arc:

Katsu had grown up on a farm outside the village of Kirigakure. He, there learned to farm, and grow and cook his own foods, like any normal person, but was isolated from the outside world. His parents kept him strictly on the farm. They taught him all he needed to learn, and his father was a former shinobi, long since retired, but he couls still teach a few basic techniques. When this took place, his father taught him how to wield a sword and fight in melee combat, and, since his father was from Mist Country, he knew nothing of the local ninjutsu or water techniques, he only knew water and fire, the complete contradictory combo of elements. He learned many basic techniques with a sword, those that require no sort of skill to do, same with the taijutsu, he learned enough to basically win a fight.

As he progressed into his early teenage years, he found himself becoming more and more skilled in these arts, and also in the basic everyday life arts as well. He found this being his key to getting out of the farm, and to explore the world. It's not like he didn't love his parents, or the farm, he had nothing against them, he just didn't want to spend all his life in a bubble.

Academy Arc:

Katsu spent most of his academy days to himself. At the beginning, especially. He took to his studies mainly, and stuck to them. He had no time for friends if he wanted to be a successful shinobi, and that was his fathers' downfall, so he did not want to be a weak genin, like his father, though, it is hard for him to say that, because his father taught him most of the things he knows today. He excelled in all of his studies, and techniques, being at the highest of his class in all categories. He was made an example of a model student, but did not let this go to his head, so he just continued to do what he wanted to do, and that was to study,m and better himself.

Once he knew he was far enough ahead of all his fellow classmates, he then made time to make friends, and he made quite a lot of them. Most of them were ridden off as "nerds" but he didn't care, they were some of the more talented ones as well, and these were the only ones he would accept, because of their ability, they knew they were fearedm so in a way, if they wished, they could become bullies.

He always obeyed rules, but the only negative comment he got from any of his teachers, well, there were two, but he only considered one of them to be vital: Learn to believe in yourself more. And this would be the goal for the rest of his days as a shinobi. Well, that and to do his always apparent goal: to better himself.

Genin Arc:

Katsu began as a genin with high expectations, but he never held it to him to do what other people wanted him to do, only what he wanted, and those who had the power to make him do what he had to. He was assigned a team, with one whom had nearly died the previous year in the Chuunin Exams, and another that seemed to have no desire to do much of anything in the world, so he really didn't bother to talk to either of them, unless
A) it was necessary, or
B) One began conversation with him first. So, he just kept to himself once again, and just mainly spoke to his sensei. And he did this rarely as well, only if he needed help, which wasn't very often, or when he felt like he was surrounded by idiots, and needed intellectual conversation.

He entered the Chuunin Exams as the heavy favorite to win it all, at all costs. Alernik looked as the Chuunin Exams as more of a gate to the rank of chuunin, rather than an obstacle, he thought of it as a goal to achieve. He whizzed thru the written exams, and the first round was no problem. He had little struggle with the second. With the finals in his grasp, he was heavily favored yet again. He barely won the match, he left with a broken leg, and a sprained left forearm. Te ther contestant barely made it out alive. The final four remaining made chuunin.

Chuunin Arc:

Katsu stood at the top of Konoha Mountain. He had gotten transported to Amegakure, because they had a shortage of genin, after a recent accident that happened in the city. He gladly went here, he always dreamed about visiting Konoha. Here, he had met the famous Hokage, and got a mission, fulfilled it within a few days, and received another. This is really all he had done as his Chuunin months pressed on, and eventually, after he received more and more advanced missions, he became a Jounin.

Jounin Arc:

Katsu began his Jounin days very unenthusiastically, not being in the mood most of the time to deal with genin, and he doeswn't normally have the patience, but he would like to test them, and see what they can do, and compare them to him when he was a genin. When his team was fully assigned, he looked at them as a good team. He had a ninjutsu specialist, medical ninja, and an archer, truly unique.

They completed 5 missions in the seven months they were together. Apparently, Katsu had taught them well enough how to make strategies, and balance out their uses in combat, and in the real world, when you are not being a shinobi, and just a civilian, because they had all obtained chuunin after the Chuunin Exams, so he felt a sense of pride, and very slightly, self confidence, maybe he was meant to be the unsung leader, and he didn't even know this, for he had never gotten a chance, or an experience quite like this.

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Ninja Data


Rank: Jounin

Position: Anbu?

Village: Sunagakure

Chakra Nature: Raiton, Suiton


Equipment
Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon

Lightning fangs are a sort of sword. The top are pointy. These are like rod liked sword. These are used for casting some certain lightning jutsus like Lightning Ball. These are used for casting jutsus. One of the 7 Swordsmen of the Mist used this, Raiga Kurosaki.

Jutsu

All starters/basic.

~CLAN JUTSU~

Name: Lightning Release : Fury of Lightning
Rank: D-B
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton
Description: The user will dispose a lot of lightning into a big blob of lightning then shoot it at the opponent in it's high speed. This uses the lightning element.

Name: Lightning Release : Lightning Fang
Rank: C-A
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton
Description: The user will gather chakra then gather it in their hands after it will send out a big amount of lightning bolots then it creates into a fang and will attack the opponent.

Name: Lightning Release : Bolt Strike
Rank: C-B
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton
Description: The user strikes lightning at the apponent quick. The lightning's speed is very quick so it's is hard to dodge but it is possible.

Name: Lightning Release : Bolt Of Lightning Combo
Rank: C-B
Type: Tai
Element: -
Description: The users charges up enough chakra then unleashed it with a series of kicks and punches. It may damage the opponent a lot it depends on how much strength you put in it.

~JUSTU~

~A Rank Raiton~

Name: Gian - False Darkness
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton • Lightning
Description: Raiton • Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After releasing lightning manipulated chakra from their body, the user will use it to release a strong bolt of electricity from their mouth.

Name: Rairyuu no Tatsumaki - Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton • Lightning
Description: The user will draw lightning down upon their body. The current will be contained within and around the user’s form. The user will then begin to spin in place, forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against an opponent. Even if the attack doesn’t directly connect with the foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

~B Rank Raiton~

Name: Ikadzuchi no Kiba - Lightning Bolt Fang
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Raiton • Lightning
Description: The user will send a plume of an electrified chakra-like essence into the clouds above to activate bolts of lightning to rain down upon a target.

Name:Raigeki no Yoroi - Lightning Strike Armor
Rank: B
Type:Nin
Element: Raiton • Lightning
Description: The user will envelope their body in a protective armor of lightning that will harm anyone who dares strike them directly.

~A Rank Suiton~

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals, a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water, the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as it pulls them away.

~B Rank Suiton~

Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel water from their gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. They can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name: Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

~C Rank Suiton~

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals, which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison that only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a Bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target with the use of the clone so long as it can use such jutsu.

Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited, however. It cannot travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert back into its natural water state.

Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: D
Type: Nin
Element: Sution • Water
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface, and it will become difficult to maneuver. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet BEFORE touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well


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PostSubject: Re: ~Katsu Takeshi~ (Done Jounin)   Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:17 pm

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..... You are aware that this is just a ninja academy for children where they learn shinobi techniques, not a college, right?

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Rai Roga [Lightnin Fangs]

Explain what those are.



As for your jutsu - Remove all the ones with "lightning". You have just about every lightning and water technique ever used in the manga, and the fact that you have techniques that shoot "blobs" and "bullets" of lightning, even mentioning that they're so fast that dodging is extremely difficult, and other such mentions, this seems way too potentially overpowered. Especially since there isn't any sort of intellectual detail in the descriptions of the jutsu to list exactly how it works or what it does other than killing your enemy with a bunch of lightning.

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If you don't even know if your own custom technique requires elemental chakra, than I suggest you: A) remove the technique, or B) Figure out if it does or not.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Katsu Takeshi~ (Done Jounin)   Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:19 pm

Bump. Changed took out some jutsu. Talked about the Rai Roga. And edited the Tai one.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Katsu Takeshi~ (Done Jounin)   Tue Apr 20, 2010 1:57 pm

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As for your jutsu - Remove all the ones with "lightning". You have just about every lightning and water technique ever used in the manga, and the fact that you have techniques that shoot "blobs" and "bullets" of lightning, even mentioning that they're so fast that dodging is extremely difficult, and other such mentions, this seems way too potentially overpowered. Especially since there isn't any sort of intellectual detail in the descriptions of the jutsu to list exactly how it works or what it does other than killing your enemy with a bunch of lightning.

Secondly, you can not have swords from the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, while being from Suna. Even if you could, I wouldn't allow a starting out Jounin to have swords that can do lightning jutsu, while also having that many Raiton and Suiton techniques of your own. So remove something of your choosing to adjust to this.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Katsu Takeshi~ (Done Jounin)   Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:05 pm

Bump. Took like 3-4 lightning jutsu out. 2 Water jutsu. Took out the Rai Roga sword. Better now? I have less jutsu.
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